Hot air balloon

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing.

We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is my picture. I need to improve on getting it done quicker.

We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in on the balloon.

When the green balloon was nearly to the finish line another hot air balloon  was right by him and then I said to the other hot air balloon “ I just want to win! Not you! I should win because you won before!” “well I want to win again!”. When the girl was talking, the finish line was near so I sped up  and then finally I won! I won $1,000,000 to share to poor people and some to go on a trip to Hawaii. Some of the money was to buy a gumball machine too. “Hey! do you want me to share my money with you ” “ yes I would love to”. And so we both share the money?" yes I would love to then every thing was good.